Please comment on the videos watched in class.
answering questions of:
Was the video messaging clear?
What was the message?
Was the video complete, what was missing?
Who do you perceive as the audience for this video?
How is the quality? Is the audio clear, are there glitches, etc?
Make overall comment that is helpful to the producer.
Pathways to Food Justice
ReplyDelete- I thought the message of the video was clear, but really broad. Maybe it would have helped to include an introduction that breaks things down into specifics.
- I thought the message of the video was just to examine all the basics about food that most people don't consider, and to resist apathy.
- The video wasn't complete (no ending), but I felt like the part that was shown was really well-paced, and flowed really well.
- Youth, or people new to food justice concepts.
- I thought the video quality was good... at times, it's hard to hear dialogue over the music, but it wasn't too distracting for me to understand.
I enjoyed this video. I think this video could interest people who normally wouldn't seek out media on this topic.
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ReplyDeletePATHWAY TO FOOD JUSTICE
by Kadiri Sennefer & Myra Lee
GOOD JOB!
love some of the reversed footage. Use it to express meaning, like transitions between locations.
love the family out in the background.
when we can see the people, the sound is better.
that last clip was the best.
i LOVE that you shot a LOT of b-roll! That makes your video so much MORE interesting to watch!
Expand your timeline (Zoom Out) so you can see all the places where your clips cut to Black because the clips are not snapped up against each other.
Didn't view the whole video but what I saw... Great job!
ReplyDeleteRisingStarFuture I think the video was dope. I think it needs an intro, if I wasnt in class and got the intro, I would not know what was going on.
ReplyDeleteDetroit Represent - The video was dope. I think you should make the text shots longer for ppl to read and I think that might pace the film out a lil, it felt a lil rushed. Over all I think it was dope.
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